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Goodness! My message centre has rather asploded in the last 24 hours. A huge thank you to ^Beccalicious for the DD. I'm having a bit of a cruddy time at the moment--nothing major, just a lot of waiting for things to happen and the frustration that comes with it--so this made me grin like an idiot. Shall respond to each and every comment once I return from cooking dinner! :>>>

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Re-uploaded by request for *Dancing-Naked. Hope this helps you recall your old memories!

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Image credit: Tim Caynes via CC license.

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This is for `WineWriter's Time Travel competition, I'm not entirely sure if it actually qualifies, since no-one travels in time. But we'll see!

I'm new to this script-writing gig (i.e. about twenty-minutes-ago new) so I'm looking for some feedback on the format, the flow, the props, that sort of thing. Whether I described the movements well, or if there's bits in our mind missing.

Oh, and any confusion about the actual premise of this would be great. I know it's a little hard to follow, so any comments on how easy it is to 'get' would be great!

Thanks guys, hope you enjoy!
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Daily Deviation

Given 2011-08-14
Yesterday, Today, and Tomorrow by `apocathary captures time personified into the office and shares the mayhem each character causes for one another. ( Featured by Beccalicious )
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draensham Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012
Bravo, this is genius!
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apocathary Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks you! :bow:
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rhianne-dostya97 Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2012
Might I just say that I am in love with this to the point where I would perform it in my acting class should I ever have the chance? Hell, reminds me of my own everyday stress too. "I need this done by tomorrow, but I'm dead if I don't finish this today and I just wish I could have figured out time management much earlier." The subsections of time are weapons against human sanity sometimes.
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apocathary Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Heh, thank you very much! I'm not ordinarily a screenplay kind of person, so it's really nice that people have connected with this one. And oh man, time management is not one of my fortes. I'm terrible at organising myself! :<
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rhianne-dostya97 Featured By Owner May 31, 2012
Same, it's a wonder my lowest grade is a C-. I'll be sure to look through your other writings when I have a spare moment. :meow:
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Princessadeli Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011
I really don't have the proper compliment for this but this was worth reading from beginning to end; a great personification of Today, Tomorrow, and Time. I was wondering why you chose the names to be so similar until you reveal that they are just abbreviations. I might have to read it a few more times to get the actual message but I have no doubt that I'll enjoy every re-read.
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apocathary Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks heaps for reading mate, so glad people got a kick out of this one. :D
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Princessadeli Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011
You're very welcome!
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KuraiOujou Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2011
I really don't know how to word a comment for this! Mainly since it's getting so much attention two and a half years later...though better late than never.

I feel very compelled to read more literature on dA now, thanks for that :] It can never be bad to read more!
Your play on words is fun and clever (Yes' men, my favorite). I'm glad that I mostly understood who each person was before the big reveal. And how easily I could relate to Tim's worries is a huge plus! Normally, I can't be bothered to understand more than I need to. But I know that Today can suck, and Tomorrow even more; especially for Time.

Oh, I'm glad I clicked this DD :] Very worth the read, and the recognition.
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apocathary Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Heh, yeah gotta say it was a bit of a surprise! But hey, I'll take it. ;P

Thanks for reading mate, seriously appreciate it. Now get on out there and read some more lit on dA! :D Try going through my favourites if you want, there's quite a few great stories in there.
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