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Goodness! My message centre has rather asploded in the last 24 hours. A huge thank you to ^Beccalicious for the DD. I'm having a bit of a cruddy time at the moment--nothing major, just a lot of waiting for things to happen and the frustration that comes with it--so this made me grin like an idiot. Shall respond to each and every comment once I return from cooking dinner! :>>>

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Re-uploaded by request for *Dancing-Naked. Hope this helps you recall your old memories!

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Image credit: Tim Caynes via CC license.

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This is for `WineWriter's Time Travel competition, I'm not entirely sure if it actually qualifies, since no-one travels in time. But we'll see!

I'm new to this script-writing gig (i.e. about twenty-minutes-ago new) so I'm looking for some feedback on the format, the flow, the props, that sort of thing. Whether I described the movements well, or if there's bits in our mind missing.

Oh, and any confusion about the actual premise of this would be great. I know it's a little hard to follow, so any comments on how easy it is to 'get' would be great!

Thanks guys, hope you enjoy!